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Treatment:
Aim: On this page I will explain the meaning of Treatment
Define: The treatment is an in-depth account on the storyline your music video follows
Explanation: It allows the reader to have a clear understanding of the characters
Version 1:
Characters:
Nick Gordon is a sixteen year old boy that has had to drop out of school to take on the responsibilities of looking after his younger sibling (Daisy). Nick is of a tall, slim build dressing in a casual style; tracksuit tops, jeans and trainers. The second character in our music video is Daisy Mowle. Daisy is a three year old girl who is currently in her first year of primary school, due to Daisy's age she does not realise the seriousness of the situation that her and her older brother are currently in. Daisy is tidly dressed in her school uniform, this contrasts with Nicks apperence.
Narrative:
Daisy and Nick walk round the corner from Daisy's school as Nick has just picked her up. On their way to the park Nick and Daisy discuss her school day and what they fancy for dinner tonight. Once they arrive at the park they play together happily on the swings, seasore and climbing frames. They are seen to be enjoying themselves, and not having a care in the world. The siblings then leave the park, and walk to their local fish and chips shop. Here they choose what to order from the menu and Nick gets his change out of his pocket to pay for the meal. Daisy and Nick then sit on a bench eating their meal. It is starting to become dark now and hints that the siblings are vulnerably housed as it is not usual for a three year old girl to be out this late. Next the siblings walk through a muddy track into an abandoned building, filled with scrap furniture, building material and general rubbish. Nick attempts to comfort his younger sister and assure her that everything is going to be okay.
Version 2:
Characters:
Nick Gordon is a sixteen year old boy that has had to drop out of school to take on the responsibilites of looking after his younger sister (Daisy). Nick is of a tall, slim build and is dressed in jeans a body warmer and trainers. The second character in our music video is Daisy Mowle. Daisy is a three year old girl who is currently in her first year of primary school, due to Daisy's age she does not realise the seriousness of the situation that her and her older brother are currently in.
Narrative:
Daisy begins the music video with walking out of a classroom and making her way through the corridor and down the stairs to where her brother is waiting for her. Daisy immediately runs up to her brother, he greets her with a big hug and spins her around. We then see Nick putting Daisy's coat on and leaving the school. The pair walk down the street to the station where they get on the tube to Epsom town. Next, they buy some food, eat it in their local park and watch the sunrise go down. Lastly the two are seen walking down a long road to an abandoned building where they end up staying for the night. At this point the audience will realise the siblings are vulnerably housed.
Version 3: FINAL VERSION
Characters:
Ella Stephens is a sixteen year old girl who has had to drop out of school, in order to take on the responsibilities of looking after her three year old daughter (Daisy). Ella is of a small build and is dressed in blue jeans, a black top, black trainers and a long green winter coat. The second character in a music video is Daisy Mowle. Daisy is a three year old girl who looks up to her mum as a role model. Due to Daisys' young age, she does not realise the seriousness of the situation that her and her young mum are currently in.
Narrative:
Daisy and Ella walk out of an unknown location, they then sit on the steps of a non vacant shop. Here they talk to one another as a teenage mum and her daughter would, whilst snacking on some sweets. Next Ella and Daisy walk into a local cafe, it is here that Daisy begins to draw what we assume is the house that she lives in with her mum, the two then discuss the images drawn. Later on in the day the girls go to the pond and have a look at the ducks, at this time they both look as if they are enjoying themselves and the day so far. Next they walk to the playground, on their way Daisy waves at the passer bys puppy, once they have arrived at the playground, Ella places Daisy into the swing and can be seen pushing her back and forth. The girls then arrive at a bus stop, by this time they are beginning to look tired, as night begins to approach. Next we see Ella and Daisy departing from the bus, Ella is carrying Daisy on her back as Daisy is now asleep, they walk a fair distance until they arrive at there final destination, where they will be spending the night. Lastly the young mum and her daughter enter the abandoned structure, Ella seems to be worried and fears for the safety of her daughter Daisy. Finally, Ella sits with Daisy in her arms on a battered sofa as Daisy begins to fall to sleep, it is now extremely obvious that the teenage mum and her daughter are vulnerably housed.
Define: The treatment is an in-depth account on the storyline your music video follows
Explanation: It allows the reader to have a clear understanding of the characters
Version 1:
Characters:
Nick Gordon is a sixteen year old boy that has had to drop out of school to take on the responsibilities of looking after his younger sibling (Daisy). Nick is of a tall, slim build dressing in a casual style; tracksuit tops, jeans and trainers. The second character in our music video is Daisy Mowle. Daisy is a three year old girl who is currently in her first year of primary school, due to Daisy's age she does not realise the seriousness of the situation that her and her older brother are currently in. Daisy is tidly dressed in her school uniform, this contrasts with Nicks apperence.
Narrative:
Daisy and Nick walk round the corner from Daisy's school as Nick has just picked her up. On their way to the park Nick and Daisy discuss her school day and what they fancy for dinner tonight. Once they arrive at the park they play together happily on the swings, seasore and climbing frames. They are seen to be enjoying themselves, and not having a care in the world. The siblings then leave the park, and walk to their local fish and chips shop. Here they choose what to order from the menu and Nick gets his change out of his pocket to pay for the meal. Daisy and Nick then sit on a bench eating their meal. It is starting to become dark now and hints that the siblings are vulnerably housed as it is not usual for a three year old girl to be out this late. Next the siblings walk through a muddy track into an abandoned building, filled with scrap furniture, building material and general rubbish. Nick attempts to comfort his younger sister and assure her that everything is going to be okay.
Version 2:
Characters:
Nick Gordon is a sixteen year old boy that has had to drop out of school to take on the responsibilites of looking after his younger sister (Daisy). Nick is of a tall, slim build and is dressed in jeans a body warmer and trainers. The second character in our music video is Daisy Mowle. Daisy is a three year old girl who is currently in her first year of primary school, due to Daisy's age she does not realise the seriousness of the situation that her and her older brother are currently in.
Narrative:
Daisy begins the music video with walking out of a classroom and making her way through the corridor and down the stairs to where her brother is waiting for her. Daisy immediately runs up to her brother, he greets her with a big hug and spins her around. We then see Nick putting Daisy's coat on and leaving the school. The pair walk down the street to the station where they get on the tube to Epsom town. Next, they buy some food, eat it in their local park and watch the sunrise go down. Lastly the two are seen walking down a long road to an abandoned building where they end up staying for the night. At this point the audience will realise the siblings are vulnerably housed.
Version 3: FINAL VERSION
Characters:
Ella Stephens is a sixteen year old girl who has had to drop out of school, in order to take on the responsibilities of looking after her three year old daughter (Daisy). Ella is of a small build and is dressed in blue jeans, a black top, black trainers and a long green winter coat. The second character in a music video is Daisy Mowle. Daisy is a three year old girl who looks up to her mum as a role model. Due to Daisys' young age, she does not realise the seriousness of the situation that her and her young mum are currently in.
Narrative:
Daisy and Ella walk out of an unknown location, they then sit on the steps of a non vacant shop. Here they talk to one another as a teenage mum and her daughter would, whilst snacking on some sweets. Next Ella and Daisy walk into a local cafe, it is here that Daisy begins to draw what we assume is the house that she lives in with her mum, the two then discuss the images drawn. Later on in the day the girls go to the pond and have a look at the ducks, at this time they both look as if they are enjoying themselves and the day so far. Next they walk to the playground, on their way Daisy waves at the passer bys puppy, once they have arrived at the playground, Ella places Daisy into the swing and can be seen pushing her back and forth. The girls then arrive at a bus stop, by this time they are beginning to look tired, as night begins to approach. Next we see Ella and Daisy departing from the bus, Ella is carrying Daisy on her back as Daisy is now asleep, they walk a fair distance until they arrive at there final destination, where they will be spending the night. Lastly the young mum and her daughter enter the abandoned structure, Ella seems to be worried and fears for the safety of her daughter Daisy. Finally, Ella sits with Daisy in her arms on a battered sofa as Daisy begins to fall to sleep, it is now extremely obvious that the teenage mum and her daughter are vulnerably housed.